tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post3284608720046596189..comments2023-06-19T06:55:10.254-04:00Comments on The UnderSide of Green: Stray Rays (Poets Rally 45)Henry Clemmonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04156533198976128355noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-52720038979134878822011-07-11T20:31:39.400-04:002011-07-11T20:31:39.400-04:00Wow. A range of emotion expressed: "green day...Wow. A range of emotion expressed: "green days" (life/promise), "hope explodes" (disappointment), "darkness spills" (sadness), and especially gripping was "granite doesn't lie" (death/sorrow). Yet what a beautiful statement in "I believe in love."<br /><br />I hope you don't mind...I'm lifting that lie to write something, myself.<br /><br />Beautiful, Henry. Truly beautiful.<br /><br />~PaulaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-18313440673375306822011-06-11T09:07:25.638-04:002011-06-11T09:07:25.638-04:00beautiful poem :)beautiful poem :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-63566923354671629942011-06-08T23:38:26.132-04:002011-06-08T23:38:26.132-04:00A beautiful refrain you tie in "I believe in ...A beautiful refrain you tie in "I believe in love" thought the flow with this line:<br /><br />"Though our bed stays half made"<br /><br />was particularly strong. Great write ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-70285412828615935372011-06-07T14:02:48.974-04:002011-06-07T14:02:48.974-04:00Beautifully written...great pic!Beautifully written...great pic!Eclipsehttp://eclipseofthemoon.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-17606397398208200982011-06-03T21:48:00.703-04:002011-06-03T21:48:00.703-04:00...Was it a car crash?
I'm just wondering abou......Was it a car crash?<br />I'm just wondering about the curved roads.<br />Beautiful.Coffee With Leonard Cohenhttp://www.coffeewithleonardcohen.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-16940088845096594162011-06-03T19:01:38.332-04:002011-06-03T19:01:38.332-04:00Very beautiful Henry! (Thanks for stopping by my b...Very beautiful Henry! (Thanks for stopping by my blog today, too!!)<br /><br />PeggyPeggy Nolanhttp://serendipitysmiles.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-28922139037682331042011-06-03T14:30:02.163-04:002011-06-03T14:30:02.163-04:00As lovely as a tree. Like the great one in the pic...As lovely as a tree. Like the great one in the picture when it was young.Harry Nicholsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16801422418560281658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-64998756076671664992011-06-03T09:19:53.673-04:002011-06-03T09:19:53.673-04:00Beautifully written. Love the images and structure...Beautifully written. Love the images and structure of this poem.Judith C Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09900422363643962837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-27789832200011299052011-06-03T04:41:26.465-04:002011-06-03T04:41:26.465-04:00This is beautiful is this about the death of a lov...This is beautiful is this about the death of a loved one? The image of the half-made bed, the granite that does not lie. That's how interpreted and it really touched me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-75686641574148396372011-06-03T01:51:24.813-04:002011-06-03T01:51:24.813-04:00Nicely crafted piece!! :-)Nicely crafted piece!! :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-71317388412297017842011-06-02T18:01:00.044-04:002011-06-02T18:01:00.044-04:00I love the compactness of this poem; loved the wor...I love the compactness of this poem; loved the words, the layout, everything. Wonderful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-79332045752502524252011-06-02T16:54:55.286-04:002011-06-02T16:54:55.286-04:00WOW! Loved this.love the photo you chose as well. ...WOW! Loved this.love the photo you chose as well. great writeIsabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630181168510791132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-19203664958287133482011-06-02T12:48:04.691-04:002011-06-02T12:48:04.691-04:00This is such a lovely poem. I've enjoyed readi...This is such a lovely poem. I've enjoyed reading so many of your poems. Each one of us strays from the sun light sometimes, and each one of us has met a ray of sunlight that strays from the sun light too, and thank God for those angels. Beautiful poem, a great job.Olive Treehttp://peaceroad.wordpress.com/2011/06/02/on-rain/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-36157707001503014492011-06-02T10:41:12.850-04:002011-06-02T10:41:12.850-04:00what a beautiful poem...
brilliantly expressed ......what a beautiful poem...<br />brilliantly expressed ... loved itRajlakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05947753574286557864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-62783811972344414382011-06-02T08:49:50.915-04:002011-06-02T08:49:50.915-04:00Deep and filled with compassion...Deep and filled with compassion...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-35233397913999461552011-06-02T07:36:48.811-04:002011-06-02T07:36:48.811-04:00Wow. I love your writing. Terrific. The photo is g...Wow. I love your writing. Terrific. The photo is gorgeous.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-50802535324176981602011-06-02T07:11:09.369-04:002011-06-02T07:11:09.369-04:00lovely ...thanks for sharinglovely ...thanks for sharingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-15041326957295037332011-06-02T05:27:36.092-04:002011-06-02T05:27:36.092-04:00SUCH A GLORIOUS poem. :] Fantastic words and rhyme...SUCH A GLORIOUS poem. :] Fantastic words and rhyme that sparkle in the eye of my ear. :] xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-25695323859725496552011-06-02T02:17:30.020-04:002011-06-02T02:17:30.020-04:00We all stray from straight lines at times...take t...We all stray from straight lines at times...take the light with us...nice lovely verse.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-39087473106811770832011-06-02T01:10:41.789-04:002011-06-02T01:10:41.789-04:00In the morning, as freshness radiates...Nicely wri...In the morning, as freshness radiates...Nicely written with a great flow of vision...My favorite were the verses..<br />'Harp strings<br />Slits of bright<br />Vibrate soft<br />Angel’s sing'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-39626738097167276082011-06-02T00:21:54.582-04:002011-06-02T00:21:54.582-04:00Cheers for the faith in love and the lovely sun ra...Cheers for the faith in love and the lovely sun rays! Very inspirational and uplifting poem, with the hint of hope for something nice to happen!Blagahttp://brokensparkles.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-24253489929958848202011-06-02T00:08:19.874-04:002011-06-02T00:08:19.874-04:00Lovely words
Great pictures.
BEAUTIFULLovely words<br />Great pictures.<br />BEAUTIFULMEIROhttp://meirozavian.wordpress.com/2011/05/26/y-o-u/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-67003151067898650442011-06-01T23:00:41.997-04:002011-06-01T23:00:41.997-04:00Glad to see sunshine
from your words.
well penned,...Glad to see sunshine<br />from your words.<br />well penned,<br /><br />:)Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.com