tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post58963133037830001..comments2023-06-19T06:55:10.254-04:00Comments on The UnderSide of Green: The Unannounced (Revised)Henry Clemmonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04156533198976128355noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-27197932126292648442011-08-10T11:47:37.196-04:002011-08-10T11:47:37.196-04:00dreamy...nice!dreamy...nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-35268647178831170792011-08-09T05:40:03.670-04:002011-08-09T05:40:03.670-04:00Her face? Many meanings here. Could be a fixatio...<i>Her face</i>? Many meanings here. Could be a fixation? Or a vision haunting your poet? Or actual glimpses of her regularly?<br /><br />I'd like to think visions of her. As I cannot visualize the poem gives me a bit of what I am missing.<br /><br />Very nicely written. The photo directs our thoughts to a young person but it can just as well portray any female who comes to the reader's mind.<br />..Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-92085662519114578162011-05-23T23:02:08.063-04:002011-05-23T23:02:08.063-04:00"...In the dark
When I'm unarmed
Parked
I..."...In the dark<br />When I'm unarmed<br />Parked<br />In sleep ..." ... very very nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-7855449311818748412011-05-23T15:06:13.957-04:002011-05-23T15:06:13.957-04:00How lovely. I love the title, too.How lovely. I love the title, too.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-59249529278904649702011-05-23T14:29:22.386-04:002011-05-23T14:29:22.386-04:00Very evocative. The poem and photo fit to perfecti...Very evocative. The poem and photo fit to perfection. Well done!James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7150278790532095430.post-6002139115395876932011-05-23T12:47:59.456-04:002011-05-23T12:47:59.456-04:00breathe taking.
thanks for the lovely treat.breathe taking.<br /><br />thanks for the lovely treat.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.com