Monday, April 18, 2011

Monday One Stop Form – Shadorma (Dustus Poem Prompt)


Runaway
Rain soaked Jersey dreams
Of escape
Pout alone
Cheep café caffeine stain sleep
With Springsteen echoes

PS Hope Annie gets feeling better.

7 comments:

Jingle Poetry said...

brilliant.

Jingle Poetry said...

Invite you to share your poetry with our poetry potluck today,
Random poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

Hope to see you in.
Bless your talent.
Cheers.
xxx

Jingle said...

A++

thanks for linking.

moondustwriter said...

Enjoyed your rewrite of Adams poem
Fun to see how words can be re-constructed
I enjoy your creative mind set - I can tell it flows in a steady stream
Your work is good!!!

Nonsense File said...

Languid bliss. Thats what comes to mind when i read your lines. Enjoyed it!

yellowhousecafe said...

really dig what you did with Dustus poem in this form...excellent write~

gautami tripathy said...

Total enjoyment!!

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