Monday, July 11, 2011

Bobbie Gail

Bobbie Gail is not my friend
Ice cubes
Turncoat
Crocodile
Hootchie momma

Bobbie Gail
Is
Two
Crazy
Hells

Bobbie Gail is not my friend

Is
That
Clear

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

Or do I need to spell it out


NOTE:  Bobbie Gail is a totally fictional character; trust me.

8 comments:

Marbles in My Pocket said...

No. I got it. This poem is strangely interesting. Strange in the sense that it's so short, yet deep. I like it a lot!

Daydreamertoo said...

Ok, I got that he is not your friend, real or not... LOL
A good read, thanks for sharing.

Morning said...

fun word play.
enjoyed it.

free style and cool.

15homegreenhome said...

Funny and well done!

Brownpaperbaggirl said...

Reminded me oddly of the song "Billy Jean is not my lover."

PhotoDiction said...

Wonderful little ditty. Reminds me a bit of a skipping song with the rhythm it has.

the feeling lioness said...

huh?
sure it jumps like like a frog
haha

Shashi said...

Hi Henry

I liked the style and the structure of the free verse... its very good. I liked the ending...


Shashi
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