Bobbie Gail is not my friend
Ice cubes
Turncoat
Crocodile
Hootchie momma
Bobbie Gail
Is
Two
Crazy
Hells
Bobbie Gail is not my friend
Is
That
Clear
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm
Or do I need to spell it out
NOTE: Bobbie Gail is a totally fictional character; trust me.
NOTE: Bobbie Gail is a totally fictional character; trust me.
8 comments:
No. I got it. This poem is strangely interesting. Strange in the sense that it's so short, yet deep. I like it a lot!
Ok, I got that he is not your friend, real or not... LOL
A good read, thanks for sharing.
fun word play.
enjoyed it.
free style and cool.
Funny and well done!
Reminded me oddly of the song "Billy Jean is not my lover."
Wonderful little ditty. Reminds me a bit of a skipping song with the rhythm it has.
huh?
sure it jumps like like a frog
haha
Hi Henry
I liked the style and the structure of the free verse... its very good. I liked the ending...
Shashi
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