The whole of humanity that we are, breathing together as one organism. I wonder if that is why we do not see each other as we do not see ourselves. I saw them all as souls of the dead.
Your internal rhymes are wonderful and I like the flow of the poem.
Every line, syllable had a magic of its own..The imagery is so well portrayed through the rhythm of your words...Oneness, that is now absent in time! Amazing..
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"...We are what is
Not skewed in cubes
Or obtuse views..." Nice.
nice ...lovely
The whole of humanity that we are, breathing together as one organism. I wonder if that is why we do not see each other as we do not see ourselves. I saw them all as souls of the dead.
Your internal rhymes are wonderful and I like the flow of the poem.
This is beautifuly, Henry.
wonderful poem, as always.
I adore "In our region left of June
under sun and tides of moon." Beautiful.
Not skewed in cubes and obtuse views, brilliantly put together
Oh, a lovely piece!
Every line, syllable had a magic of its own..The imagery is so well portrayed through the rhythm of your words...Oneness, that is now absent in time! Amazing..
Wonderful.
Anna :o]
oooo nice
and man could I hear the beat
tugging pulling releasing
very nice indeed
Love this! For some reason this line really sticks out to me:
We are what is
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