Sky blue flies
a kite
of gold
Sparrows sing
of lilac
bloom
Sons smell leather
tossed
in glee
Old bike rusts behind the barn
Wrinkled hands
work soft
a broom
Puppies yelp
inside
a box
Bumble bees bounce
roses
pink
Old bike rusts behind the barn
Awake
Awake
My Schwinn of old
Arise
Arise
And pedal bold
You can
You can
Shake off the mold
Awake
Arise
You can’t be old
Lonely leaf
waves bye
to green
Daylight shrinks
in evening’s
yawn
Windows close
to battle
chill
Old bike rusts behind the barn
Scarecrows pout
out on the
farm
Sweaters
grow down
children’s arms
Sons move south
on beaches
warm
Old bike rusts behind the barn
Awake
Awake
My Schwinn of old
Arise
Arise
And pedal bold
You can
You can
It’s not too cold
Awake
Arise
You can’t die old
Blankets white
lie still
in sleep
Barren trees
no nests
to keep
Echoed boys
sleigh down
hills deep
Old bike rusts behind the barn
Calendars thin
one page
left
Sons send gifts
quietly
wrapped
Silent Night hummed
damp eyes
close
Old bike rusts behind the barn
Awake
Awake
My Schwinn of old
Arise
Arise
And pedal bold
You can
You can
Shake off the cold
Awake
Arise
You can’t die old
Sky blue flies
a kite
of gray
Robins sigh
a song
of bloom
Sons travel home
dressed
in black
Old bike’s gone behind the barn
Wrinkled hands
clasped stiff
on breast
Church suit
starched
inside pine box
Pink blooms
wilt
in watered vase
Old bike’s gone behind the barn
Awake
Awake
My Schwinn of old
Arise
Arise
And pedal bold
You can
You can
In Heaven’s fold
Awake
Arise
You won’t be old
11 comments:
Wow! This is fantastic! not to mention the awesome photo as well. I think I have indeed awakened! Truly enjoyed the visit, and will certainly return! Happy Easter ~ N
lovely calling,
well done.
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:)
beautiful, awakening poetry :) and a gorgeous image too.
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I am awakened with each line. lovely :)
I love how this flows! Each line is captivating!
Absolutely love this. This reminds me of a Jim Croce song...the refrain...of a life lived.
oh man, this is absolutely beautiful! You should be published! I'm honored that you visited my blog
Absolutely fabulous. The flow is perfect, the seasons of life rolled out with ideal imagery. The repetition applies emphasis at just the right time and place, then evolves as does the character. This is one of the best pieces I've read in a very long time. I will now subscribe to your RSS feed!
Thanks for your feedback on my rally entry--and for sharing this piece. The images you paint put us right in your picture. With the repetition, I could see this poem working as lyrics. I'm going to have to take a prowl to check out some of your other photos; fabulous work.
Sweet poem. I especially like the repetition of the refrain and last line of each stanza.
So beautiful!
Maybe I'm slow, but the way this poem unfolded for me was just perfect. Not understanding at first that it was about life/time/age, I was deeply moved when I reached the last few stanzas. Basically, I was just reading along, enjoying the flow of the words, when whoosh! I was suddenly swept up in sweet epiphany. We grow old. We die. It's okay.
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