Painting by Leonid Afremov http://www.afremov.com/
Crying between rhythmic thighs
Stroked legato, gently
Uninterrupted, long and smooth
Then quickly, sharp, staccato
Pleasurable whines, whimpers
Strung tight, perfect fifths
Passionate fingertips caress neck, glissando
Rising, falling, seamless
Air flows, in and out, of F-holes
Her bow, a perfect touch, taut
Orgasmic vibratos
They’re one.
Muses celebrate in multi-colored frenzies
Symphonic life, birthed
Forcing art forefront
From muse's womb
Creation’s water breaks
One last push
Angelic face free
Umbilical leash cut
A slap
Fortissimo
Life born
9 comments:
Oh, this is brilliant. So glad to discover your blog and hoping to spend more time here tomorrow...it's getting late. Victoria
Beautiful way to describe the miracle of life.
Oh, and love that gorgeous tree in your header!
Absolute brilliance. The metaphoric theme is superb. You have captured intensity throughout.
I just love metaphors that seem to chase each other back and forth through the length of the poem. You did a fantastic job with this!
Excellent.
you bloe me away with the art/poetry style.
A++
blow me away (oops),
I forgot to eat my breakfast today...
loved your entry, superb talent.
Life is music, and music life. Thanks for this stirring poem. Well done!
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