The UnderSide of Green: The Unannounced (Revised)

Friday, April 22, 2011

The Unannounced (Revised)

Her face visits
In the dark
When I'm unarmed
Parked
In sleep

Her face visits
Draped in angel blonde
Eyes sparkle
Lips part in whisper
I love you

Her face visits
Slices my
Beating heart … into thin pieces on a paper plate

6 comments:

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...: breathe taking.

thanks for the lovely treat.; May 23, 2011 at 12:47 PM
James Rainsford said...: Very evocative. The poem and photo fit to perfection. Well done!; May 23, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Maggie said...: How lovely. I love the title, too.; May 23, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Anonymous said...: "...In the dark
When I'm unarmed
Parked
In sleep ..." ... very very nice!; May 23, 2011 at 11:02 PM
Jim said...: Her face? Many meanings here. Could be a fixation? Or a vision haunting your poet? Or actual glimpses of her regularly?

I'd like to think visions of her. As I cannot visualize the poem gives me a bit of what I am missing.

Very nicely written. The photo directs our thoughts to a young person but it can just as well portray any female who comes to the reader's mind.
..; August 9, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Anonymous said...: dreamy...nice!; August 10, 2011 at 11:47 AM