Monday, May 30, 2011

No Fear (potluck)



Stalking darkness
Billowing freight
Angry carpet rolls ‘cross light
Blow and huff
Rant and rage
Flash and roar
Give your best performance
On my field-like stage

I’ll spin and swirl and dance in waves
Of thankful expectation
There is no fear of you in me
I love your demonstration.

Just make sure before you quit and fade away to mist
You share your rain upon my hair and leave me with a kiss

I love the way my golden soul
Contrasts your blackened heart.
And how your evil face of scars
Enables me to grow.

11 comments:

Kathe W. said...

whoa- very powerful imagery and words.

pamanner said...

I was there in the wind and blackness.

thingy said...

I love the way you see things. This is wonderful.

Jingle said...

visual and powerful imagery,
Thanks for sharing.

:)

Rajlakshmi said...

powerful and deep write ...
i totally loved the ending. beautifully penned

Fiducia said...

Like Kathe said...very powerful in feel and thought!! My favorite...

'I love the way my golden soul
Contrasts your blackened heart.
And how your evil face of scars
Enables me to grow.'

Judith C Evans said...

Your descriptions, such as "angry carpet rolls 'cross light", drew me right into the scene. Bravo!

mindlovemisery said...

I really wish there was a like button! I absolutely love this poem (the picture is gorgeous too). Every line, I wouldn't change a damn thing its wonderful

pure2core said...

"I’ll spin and swirl and dance in waves
Of thankful expectation
There is no fear of you in me
I love your demonstration." loved those lines...Terrific write...

lunawitch15 said...

wow what a different way to look upon it!

Mary said...

I'm there! Love the sentiment and the way you expressed it.

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