Sunday, May 29, 2011

Trance (Haiku Heights 45)


By Matilde Caceres-Zelinger


Subconscious layers,

Fragmented thought united.

Eyes close, mind ignites.

8 comments:

Christine said...

Wonderful. I need to close my eyes more often.

Judith C Evans said...

"Eyes close, mind ignites"...love this line. Been there myself! :)

Gowthami said...

"Fragmented thoughts united.."
beautiful lines...
loved it!

Jingle said...

the last line is beautifully smart.
cheers.

beccagivens said...

LOVE it!! :D

meethimirchi said...

Our dreams are much more beautiful than out thoughts

mindlovemisery said...

Wonderful I certainly indulge in dreaming

pr910 said...

absolutely fabulous! visual and abstract together, if that is possible.

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