Sunday, May 15, 2011

Surrender (Sunday Scribblings)

Julia Ranson

I wave a white flag
    bloodied by knives in my spine
Even you, Brutus


Matt Coughlan said...

great haiku! potent,
concentrated like orange
juice, refreshing work!

bttrflyscar said...

gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous

Kim Nelson said...

Perfectly parsed.

Laurie Kolp said...

Henry~ Powerful... packs quite a punch.

Amanda said...

Really, that says everything one can say about surrender.

I'm Just a Man (Recording Experiment ... I can't sing)

I am in the mood to change my tree to a cubic version.