Sunday, May 15, 2011

Surrender (Sunday Scribblings)


Julia Ranson

I wave a white flag
    bloodied by knives in my spine
Even you, Brutus

5 comments:

Matt Coughlan said...

great haiku! potent,
concentrated like orange
juice, refreshing work!

bttrflyscar said...

gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous

Kim Nelson said...

Betrayal.
Perfectly parsed.

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/16/back-off-back-down-black-dog/

Laurie Kolp said...

Henry~ Powerful... packs quite a punch.

Amanda said...

Really, that says everything one can say about surrender.

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