Monday, May 16, 2011

Eternal-ized (Single Impression)


Peter Dranitsin

I saw us hanging on a wall
In public

A last moment
Frozen

Our reoccurring last kiss
Eternal-ized

Time’s swirling clouds of collapse
Swallow memories
Of jets and buildings
And your desk
On the 70th floor

I still feel your
Lips
Soft whisper,

I saw us hanging on a wall
In public

I cried
Again

3 comments:

Claudia said...

wow henry - this is awesome - you had me with the first very strong line and kept my attention all through to the grande final, ending very personal and on a very soft tune - powerful

Eclipse said...

Time’s swirling clouds of collapse
Swallow memories... just brilliant!
A very touching one, Henry, great write as always....

sandra said...

lovely ...beautiful....and image too!

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