Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Soul Tanka (3 word wed)






Of swords long sharp face

Of rifles rapt refusal

A warrior’s soul

Blood red strength brandished weapon

Managing his soul prospers






                             
 art by: Dennis Knecht 

3 comments:

Kim Nelson said...

Managing? ... Constraining? ... In this brief piece you evoked many questions while describing the perfect soldier.

trisha said...

I wish i could just walk through the screen of my computer and in your banner!

Its amazing!!!!!

very insightful poem.

Susan May James said...

Love the tree, love the tanka and love finding a new great site to follow!

I'm Just a Man (Recording Experiment ... I can't sing)

I am in the mood to change my tree to a cubic version.