Cloud trees release their fruit to the wind
a hundred feet above
in fields of eternal blue.
Clouds are birthed in this grove.
My tears alone water these giants;
until,
that is,
my sorrow runs dry.
But
do sorrows ever run dry
this side of blue sky,
this underside of clouds,
where rain falls
and orange mist rusts red bicycles?
I’d like to move to the sun fruit forest,
but pay is better here;
more job security,
and I am alone
to create cloud sounds for blue skies,
and those who live downwind.
I need my trees;
I’m afraid to leave,
and the valley needs rain.
For Poetry Potluck
8 comments:
Unique..feel and theme!
Cloud tress..the vision is awestruck with the depth in each word..'
I like the blending of metaphorical touch in these verses..Nice..well done again.
A gorgeous poem, I really love this and the feelings it evokes. Nice work!
I'm in the forest feeling all the emotions you've put into this beautiful piece.
Those trees are beautiful I can see why they'd inspire you and the poem is stunning really stunning. I know how it is to cling to the bottom. Powerful poem
love your cloud tree.
wow.
I can't seem to find the "I absolutely love this" button.
You truly are a wordsmith
lovely trees. they would be hard to leave.
Trees are indeed so inspiring, the pic is more than beautiful, the words are gorgeous....An outstanding poem, Henry
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