Monday, June 27, 2011

Sergeant Pepper



Silent asps hiss in shade
Sands of age shifting shape
Copper-head bolts to strike
Flitting hare hugs four bites
Kissing doves lost in haze
Sergeant Pepper singing grace

For Wordle 10

15 comments:

Fiducia said...

Wordle king, you've done it again! The title caught my eye and the words bowled me over! Lovely one...Flitting hare hugs four bites and kissing doves lost in haze...Nice one! Rhythm exists in each line!

Susannah said...

Well wordled. :-) ...I loved the last line.

Mary said...

Henry, I love the way you completed this wordle. Sergeant Pepper - a nice memory!

daydreamertoo.com said...

Lovely use of all the word prompts. Love the pic of John Lennon too.
A good write and, read.

daydreamertoo.com said...

Lovely use of all the word prompts. Love the pic of John Lennon too.
A good write and, read.

barbara said...

Okay. We're talking seriously concise now. Love the copperhead!

undercaws said...

sands of age shifting shape...wow! Sounds abound, content packs a punch, and Lennon flashes a peace sign. You made my day.
~brenda

vivinfrance said...

Love it, Henry - took me back to my youth!

catieeliza said...

Well now, Aren't these wordy compositions splendid? I like the pictures you paint in this wee poem. :] xx

donnakiser said...

Terrific rhythm and rhyme. I'm jealous.
dk

Traci B said...

Cool poem, Henry, and a very different use of the wordle. :)

margoroby said...

I love it when you play, Henry. And then you throw in Lennon and Sergeant Pepper. What's not to like?

margo

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Really good!

Bluebell Books said...

you are so creative.

Bluebell Books said...

Invite you to write something based on the image you see,
Hope all is well.
Thanks for the attention.
Appreciate your input.
Cheers.

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