I just feel the loneliness in these verses..The very word 'half-ness' speaks volumes of solitude! Great work...short, yet deep! ...Beautiful!
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Lovely yet poignant poem, Henry.
Pamela
Oh, ouch. So much pain in so few words. Excellent poem.
Glow and half-ness
wow there is some pain pouring sown that page
Very sad indeed, good warning, need to keep that sun alive in my home
oh man...in so few words this carries a punch...i feel the burn in your words...
Poignant piece, Loved the theme, carefully woven words, short and encompassing in it a long very sadness. Good work!
I just feel the loneliness in these verses..The very word 'half-ness' speaks volumes of solitude! Great work...short, yet deep! ...Beautiful!
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A stunning poem and not so long ago I was there, so I know the pain well. Were working on things though
Excellent, brief but with a brevity that indicates nothing more can be said to say it better or deeper.
there is not much left to say then...poignant and sad write with an excellent title - enjoyed it henry
A sad situation far too common. Lovely piece.
Oh wow - that's it - you said it so well.
good start
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